Concept 28 #2

For the three master scenes i would choose the first event that caused the conflict between ulysses s. grant and robert e. lee. 

For the second scene i would choose an action scene of the battle to add some action to the story. 

The third scene would be the resolution of the whole story.

Groundhog day reflection

This movie's linear structure is only based 24 hours, and he just repeated the same day over and over. Compared to Citizen Kane, Groundhog Day repeated the same day and the movie doesn't focus on the main character's past.

Psycho Reflection

The movie was entertaining for the most part. I was suprised that the main character was killed early into the movie. However, the story continued for the most part.  I enjoyed the suspense that the music created in the killing scenes.

Concept 25 #3

The event of my life would be be moving from washington to san jose.  The logline would be :  Moving is never easy, especially when you go back to a danger zone.

The logline doesnt really describe what really has happened to me but i think it is dramatic.

Pilot Episode 2

Format: 1

Characters: 2

Entertainment: 2

I think the story is difficult to understand because of the vocabulary. But the story is interesting overall & i think it will be funny in  a sophisticated way.